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Types of singers in Taiwan(第2版)

So far as (As far as) I am concerned, there are three types of singers here in Taiwan. Singers who have a gorgeous voice and be (plural) capable of singing are type one. Such as A-mai(阿妹), known as a world popular singer, is an aboriginal (structure). She is really a fascinating (inappropriate word) singer. Every one goes crazy about her including me. Secondly, singers may not have a ( an ) outstanding singing talent, then they must have a good looking face or super shape to attract their fans. For instance, a famous group called female F4(女F4) is one of the examples. Singers who don't have a good appearance or singing talent are what I called the last type. These kinds of singers need to try their best to entertain their audience. They make people laugh and have a good mood, like如花. And we will ignore their look and singing skills, but focusing (原形動詞) on their entertaining performance. All in all, I think those three different types of singers as I mentioned above are appeal (Ving, adj.) to me. I like them all！


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