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Assignment 3 ( 1st draft or 2nd draft?) - Types of singers in Taiwan

The Music market in Taiwan is very variety (diverse). The types of singers are (can be) classified according to their national (N.), numbers of group (single singer or group singers) and composing a song (whether they can compose or not).

The types of singers in the first category are their nationality (Singers of different nationalities enrich the musical market in Taiwan). They come from Republic of Singapore, Malaysia, Hong-Kong, local people (Taiwan) and China. Even though they come from many different countries, they almost use Chinese language to sing. The second category is (Singers can be) classified according to the numbers of a group. Most of the singer (plural) in Taiwan is (plural) single, but the group is also popular by people (delete) now. The last category is classified according to (refers to singers who can) compose a song. The singers have to have the nice voice and face in the early (Siners in the earlier time had to have a nice voice and face), but now it’s not enough. They not only have the basis conditions which said above but also have the writing talent (grammatical and structural problem, please rewrite this sentence). Part of (Some) singers here in Taiwan has the composition (composing) talent. Sometimes they can play ( ) piano by themselves and sing their own song (plural) in (at) the same time. By doing this, they have become a versatile singer. The singers have the (their own) characteristics in each category. For example, May Day is ( ) group, they are the (delete) Taiwanese and they can write the songs including pop, rock music, etc.


***You can recategorize the types of singers. The modifications that I made are just based on your original ideas. It can be made better. Besides, in addition to grammatical and structural problems, you need to form a habit of reading some English everyday to develop a sense of English. It is never to late to learn English, especially at your young age.