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Assingment 3(2nd draft) types of singers in Taiwan

I like listening to music very much. If I sit down in front of my desk I will turn on sound(?) and listen ( ) ( ) every day. I think types of (delete) singers are (how about change it into "can be") divided into four types inTaiwan. They are pop music, out-of-fashion, R&B, and Rock.

Pop music is my favorite types of music. If anyone singes who have a new albumI will listening (Who? and grammatical problem) right away such as Jolin and so forth. Out –of-fashion means older music or singers. those (These) singers may sing mother-tongue or out of fashion songs. For example, 謝金燕,陳盈潔, and so on. The most famous R&B singers (單數) is Jay. he is very popular in his fist (spelling) album until now (grammatical problem, please rewrite this sentence). His music (adj.) style all familiar with each song but they are very good listening (Chinese English, please rewrite this sentence). May day is the Rock Band that I am like it in all types of Rock singers (Chinese English, rewrite it please). They always give their passion for the audience. They love their songs and bring the happiness (to the audience?). I like to listen to all kinds of types of (delete) music. No matter who is she or he (she or he is), if I think (delete) the songs are good for listening, I will accept ( ). I think different kinds of singers will bringpeople different feelings.


***Your writing sounds quite Chinese English and you have serious mechanics problems (拼字, 標點, 句點, 句與句之間空格, 等等). Besides, try to think about using conjunctions (連接詞) to make your writing sound coherent (順暢).