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Assignment 3 2nd edition Types of singers in Taiwan

There are many types of singers in Taiwan. Owing to this, we can know more about the music style (建議用 music 一字即可) and listen to different music style (plural). I divide into three parts of them(grammar) : hip-hop, rock and ballad. The most popular type of music in Taiwan is hip-hop. For example, Jay Chou is the sample of them(sample 通常指物件). He is one of the famous singers in Taiwan. He plays music on his way and resist it(? ideas are not clear). He doesn't care about others' eyesight (inappropriate word) and do it (do what?) by himself. Although I don't really like him, I still think he has his thought to contribute different kind of music to let me know this style of music (structure and ideas). Many companies find that this type ( ) music to become (grammar) famous, so many singers follow this type. They sing very quickly and unclear (ideas are not clear, do you mean the tempo of their music is quick and vague?). If we don't have lyrics at hand, we can't understand what they sing. I think that many audiences just like the music not the lyrics' true meaning (ideas are not clear).

Another type of music in Taiwan is rock music. Wu-bai is the best sample (inappropriate word). His music has strong tempo. This is the characteristics of the music. They use drums or something else to make enough feelings (ideas?). The listeners will feel excited just because its tempo. It makes you release your pressure and forget something which make you sad. Sometimes I think my tympanum will be broken. The voice should be strong enough to shock the audience.

The other type which I divide (the third type of music) is ballad. This kind of singers were famous about ten or fifteen years ago. Most old persons in Taiwan like it (what?) very much. Old persons think they can understand the meanings of the songs and they are easy to sing. Slow tempo can be heard easily (meaning?). They also make listeners feel comfortable because soft music make the life step down (slow down?). For example, Judy Jiang, ...(try to finish this sentence). Many people like her voice and buy her records to support her. She won several awards.In modern life, everyone is too busy to relax themselves. They choose what they want to listen to. Usually, the lyrics provide imaging (inappropriate word) space. But I think the lyricss provide over (IW, do you mean "too many") love stories. Maybe it will be changed in our (the) future.

In Taiwan, there are still many types ( )singers. But I consider (think) many singers are too familiar (do you mean 類似?) to play their own style (delete) music. Over apish (inappropriate words)makes audiences feel bored. They don't like ( ) listen ( ) the same things from different people. They hope to hear different style ( ) music around the globe.(According to classmates' comments, I have modified some points.)


***You have a bundle of good ideas but it is a pity that sometimes the ideas are not clear to the readers due to the wrong grammatical and structural problems. Please reread your writing and try to elaborate on the ideas that seems vague to the readers, O.K.?