Hsie, Yu-chi 's Compare & Contrast

In my opinion, I think it can be focused on two subject (inappropriate word),freedom and convenience , to compare and contrast living ( ) home and living in the dormitory. For freedom, If you live home, you will be restricted to a lot of things ,such as entrance (IW) time or study time ; Therefore, your time isn’t controlled by yourself. In contrast, If you live in the dorm, you can manage your time more flexible (adv.). For the other subject (IW), iving ( )home is more convenient than living in the dormitory in daily life. You needn’t worry about something like eating, washing clothes when you live home; However, living in the dormitory is also more convenient than living home in other ways. For example, If you have some problem (plural) in school work, you can discuss it (plural) with your roommate (plural) when you live in the dormitory. [The same situation for living home] (structure), your parent (plural) can’t solve your problem(plural) unless they are teacher (plural) in the field which you studied. Both of living ( ) home and ( ) dorm are (delete) have some advantages and disadvantages.