Lee, Jong-Wei's Compare & Contrast
[It is obvious that living in the dormitory or living at home] (incomplete sentence). I prefer the latter. Now, I am a student and live at ( ) school dorm. [But(wrong 連接詞) Home gives me the idea that I always feel free、easy and much more comfortable than dorm](doesn't sound like English). Furthermore, I enjoy the time to get together with my family. [Although, it is quiet a long distance from our home to school] (incomplete sentence). I need to commute everyday. Still, I would choose to live with my family. On the other hand, living in the dorm would definitely be another different experience for a person who used to live at home like me. So far as I know, school dorm is cheap and being with my roommate (plural) will have a lot of fun,of course. Often times (delete) we will go to night market(plural) for dinner or (delete) to Taipei zoo by MRT or just hanging around Taipei after school. And I took a lot of lovely pictures with them. I will never think of those pictures without thinking of my dear friends. All in all, Home or dorm?Well, I love ( ) ( ) home a little bit more.


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