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Assignment 3(2nd)- whose songs is the most popular in the KTV?

Music is always a pop culture during (among) the young. What is the latest album of some singer(plural) or a new song is very great are the talking points (chatting topics) that never stop between the (delete) friends. Especially, when singing in the KTV has become a popular entertainment for the young people, it makes them take the notice of songs and singers. They find out what kind of songs is easy to sing and whose songs suit their tone by taking the notice of them (can be deleted cause sounds wordy). And what types of sings' (spelling) song (plural) is (are) the most popular ones in the KTV? Let’s talk about it in my option (ideas are not clear).

I think singers usually have their own style of songs. There are two types- Mainstream and Alternative music from the style of singer’s songs (sounds wordy). The latter usually have less sale volumes (?) and more different content, except about romance than the former. Some aboriginal singers in Taiwan, such as Biung (王宏恩), belong to Alternative music. He always plays the guitar singing the songs of Bunun Tribe (布農族) by his way. When listen (grammar) his songs, listeners could (can) have a new feeling about nature and the aboriginal culture. Alternative music usually caters to specialized customers so it usually is (is usually)missed by the young. That is also why alternative music is not very popular in the KTV.

On the other hand, mainstream music is popular in the KTV these days. And it can be easily divided into three groups- Hip Hop, Rock and Lyric Music in Taiwan. The singers of Hip Hop have very few people in Taiwan (There are not many...), such as Ma Ji Brother (麻吉弟弟).
And (On the contrary), the singers of Rock have more than Hip Hop, for instance, there are May Day (五月天)、Five Hundred (伍佰) (please rewrite this sentence to make it more coherent). The two kinds of singers usually have rapid tempo and make the atmosphere hot and high. Those songs are very suitable to warm up singing in the KTV because of that reason.

The other singers except the two kinds (structue) are Lyric singers. The cantus usually are very similar and very easy to sing. The types (This type) of singers also use brisk or light rhythm and toughing voice to sing to move listeners’ hearts, above all, some persons had the same situation as like as the words of songs (structure, grammar, and ideas are not clear). And that is why it is the most popular songs in the KTV.


***You have rich ideas but there are also some grammatical and structural problems in your writing. Please keep cultivating the good ideas and pay attention to the form of your English. Ex. "could have" means that "本來可以, 但是因為...而不能."