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Assignment (3)：Types of singers in Taiwan -second draft

Taiwan is a colorful (multicultural) socity; therefore, we have a diversity of singers. Some singers are growing (過去分詞) up in Taiwan, some singers are coming from other contries, and some singers are aborigines in Taiwan. Because they come from different contries (cultures and backgrounds), they's (grammar) performances can more diversified (grmmar). I sort the types of singers in Taiwan by their performance styles. Singers separate into three parts (grammar)- creative singers, capable (inappropriate word) singers, and “Taiwan” singers(台客) in Taiwan . Every type of singers in Taiwan has possession of a very important state (grammar).

Allow me (informal) to introduce the creative singers at first. They creative (V.) the songs which are belong (grammar) to themselves. For example, Lee Hom Wang, and Jay Chou are fantastic singers. Their music is a fusion of several different styles of music such as oriental music and occidental music. They are elaborated innocently (ideas are not clear) in their music. Their success began (inapproprate word) their complete absorption in creative (grammatical problem and ideas are not clear). By the way(inapproriate 連接詞), their songs are excellent.

( ) second type of singers in Taiwan is capable (IW) singers. The (This) types of singers can sing and dance and push the bonhomie forward in live (? ideas are not clear). For instance, A-mei and Jolin have high-level performance in their concerts. When you are in their concert, you can have a fantastic feeling. They don't off-key or forget the librettos. The most important thing for their success is that they are hard workers. They always learn new things for letting (to let) their fans can (delete) feel their different exhibition (IW). I commended (wrong word) their show (plural) for you.

( ) third type of singers in Taiwan is “Taiwan” singers who are the freshest form singer groups (grammar) now. For instance, Hot-dog, 張震嶽 and so on. Their style (plural) is copy other styles (what do you mean by this?) and you can distinguish them by their accent (plural). In the first time, the group was cheapened by community (which group and what do you mean by this?). However, their song (delete) style (plural) can be accepted now and lift up their state grammar). They were professed that we have to assurance to face anything (grammatical problems and ideas are not clear). I am “Tai” so what？ If anyone says we are “Tai”, we also can (can also) have assurance (ideas are not clear). In fact, “Taiwan” singers are not all negative; you can learn something from their spirit such as never giving up. No matter what types of singers they are, they have their own supporting fans. Fans have to understand to esteem others (grammar and ideas are not complete). That is a very important thing among all fans. Their behaviors like democracy made our admiration (grammar).


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1. You have a bundle of rich ideas; however, it is a pity that there are lots of grammatical problems in your writing.
2. Please elaborate on (仔細說明) the meaning of "Tsai" in English.