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Types of singers in Taiwa(2nd edition)

In the very beginning, I declare that I do not know about the singers in Taiwan and the style of songs very well. Therefore, I will mention a few of singers who I only just remember. By the way, I know what I say may be nonsense to some people who know that quite clear (adv. or you can use "well"), and please do not mind. There are too many styles of songs and too many types of singers in the world, and I always separate them into three kinds: comfortable type, exciting type, and noise (adj., because you use adjectives to describe the previous two types) type. First, the singers of "comfortable type" always ease my pressure, and I will enjoy them any time I wanted (present tense). Thus, singers like Theresa Teng who passed away for many years and Ching-fang etc. will be classified into the comfortable type of singers. Second, the singers of exciting type who (delete) always make me feel so exciting (pp. 過去分詞). Any time when I want to play computer games or take exercises ( ) will hear them. Consequently (?), singers like Yan-zi, Jay Chou, and A-mei will be classified to this type. Finally, the singers of noise (adj.) type, and I always don’t want to hear them but the time when I am not stay (grammatical problem and ideas are not clear enough). Because this kind of music always make me feel restless, and I always can not calm down when I hear them. For example, the singer(plural) like Machi-Di-Di, MC hot dog will be classified to this type. In conclusion, there are too many singers and music in Taiwan, and it is not enough to classify them in three types by a layman like me. Moreover, most of Taiwan singers have multi-styles, and it is not possible just to distinguish them from parts of their works. So, we can just leave them to experts. (good comments!)


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