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2nd draft of Assignment 3 Type of singer in TaiwanIn Taiwan

Album companies find a lot of singer (plural) everday ; however, the type between each other may be not same (what do you mean by this?). In my opinion, we can distnguish (divide) Taiwn singer (plural) type (delete) into three parts (types), Creation, Strength and Icon.

For the type of Creation, these (this) kind of singer (plural) can create melody or lyrics of song (P) and good at singing, such as Chris(Hung-Ming Yo) , he has been a singer more than ten years ago (delete) in Taiwan and has been created all songs of (for) his albums since he began a singer (delete, because it sounds wordy). If a singer can issue his album continuously more than five years in Taiwan, he must ( ) a great singer; therefore, it represent (第三人稱且單數, I think "demonstrates" will convey what you mean here) how excellent is Chris (Chris is). And for the type of Strength, these (this) kind of singer (P) may be (maybe) can't create songs, but they can sing very well. They can make a wonderful interpretation of the songs and let people be addicted to their voice (good sentence). A-mei is a good singer in person of Strength (rewrite this part to make your ideas clearer). She can influence listener's (listeners') emotion when she is singing. For the other one, I really disdain this type of singer (P). They only have good looking to attract some one-dimensional (Ah!? What is this?) people; moreorver, they even can't sing the (a) song. Although this type of singer (P), such as 5566, K-one, 183-club, is so bad and offensive (what do you mean by this word?), they still have a great amount of fans who are mostly junior high school student (P) in the great part of (delete). In summary, these three type (P) of singer (P) is (are) main parts in Taiwan (do you mean they represent the majority of singers in Taiwan?).


*** Classfications are clear to understand. However, from you writing, you can obviouly see that you have "plural" problme. Along with it, some ideas are not well-elaboraed and the use of inappropriate words make the readers confused about what you mean.