A9308023 (Assignment 4)

The Effects of an Invention or Innovation in Modern Life (Assignment 4-2 edition)

Life becomes more and more conveniences (形容詞) in recent ten years. so to speak that’s all attribute (This can be attributed) to the invention or innovation of technology, included (including) communication, computers and consumer electronic (? please rewrite this part).

The innovation of communication has a great jump (?) lately. Ten years ago, cell phones had big, and ugly appearances, cell phone (delete) and calling fees was (複數) very expensive, so it was not catholicize (do you mean "they were not popular"?) . But now in Taiwan, in average (almost) everyone has more than two cell phones and numbers from children to elders. You don’t need to pay any money for a cell phone if you have a contract to hold a number for 18 months or 2 years. Cell phoness will even replace telephones in the future. That would be very magically (形容詞). And by the Internet, we can use some about(?) MSN, Skype or e-mail to communicate with people. They made (現在式) communication speedy. The innovation of communication change the world’s step.

Consumer electronic invents a lot of new products (structure), like i-Pod, MP3 player, TV games, and Handheld Games. Our entertainments turn into plentiful (structure), in the past we need went (to go) outside to meet friends to played ( 原行動詞) games, now you only need to stay at home and but (?) something like XBOX, Gameboy or computers. By playins such interesting games, you would have fun, too. And you don’t need to carry a recorder around, you just need to hold (by hanging) a MP3 player on your chest, you can hear FM or songs without CDs. That’s really expediency (?). Life grow into more interesting (Do you mean "Life becomes more interesting).

Just like before I say ( what I said before), the invention of computers is the greatest invention in the world latterly (wrong word). At present we rely on computers deeply, included (including) work, knowledge finding (do you mean "information search"), shopping and even writing homework, it double-dye our life become quickly (? I do not understand this part). In the future we may do anything through computers, like studying, seeing a doctor, and confference (attending a conference). Computers also influence communication and consumer electronics they need (which need to be) combined with computers, or they would not advance so fast. We can say that 3C (communication, computers and consumer electronics) all owing to the invention of computers (I do not understand this part), so Bill Gates is the richest man around (in) the world. that’s why he could made so much money (delete).

3Cs change our living custom (habits), they made(現在式) our life more convenience(形容詞), and they deeply influence us. In the past we don’t need them and we also do anything well, but currently we can not live without them. Are (Do) they really improve our life or not? Anything has two dimension (aspects): good and bad, it depends on your notion to them (I do not understand this part, please rewrite it).